广西经贸职业技术学院论坛
标题:
我写的
[打印本页]
作者:
守护海豚の熊
时间:
2008-11-11 14:31
标题:
我写的
<p><font size="3"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#ff00ff">秋夜难眠孤自酒,才解罗裳,微风渐寒流.明月怎知相思苦?笑照佳人朱颜瘦.朱弦难掩万般愁.</font></font></p>
: o, a8 z) `* W) k' `
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#ff00ff" size="3">欲饮千壶求一醉,酒未醉人,满目相思泪.轻语问花花已睡,只身孤影心憔悴.</font></p>
/ O5 t( X% \3 z7 q6 `
[此贴子已经被作者于2008-11-14 12:25:37编辑过]
作者:
忧伤
时间:
2008-11-11 19:49
真的是楼主写的？？我怎么感觉在哪看过啊？？
作者:
贝儿
时间:
2008-11-12 15:42
<p>啊哦...</p>
作者:
守护海豚の熊
时间:
2008-11-13 09:39
<p>那你去找找吧</p>
2 U7 Z5 e4 {5 _" c& `. L O0 c5 Y
<p>找到一样的就来告我侵权[em65]</p>
9 t$ r4 c7 M! T: c
<p>我那天写完给了南宁市沛鸿民族中学的语文老师-梁**看过的.</p>
' h9 U9 z9 f5 r, ]3 h5 M
<p>人证物证都有[em52]</p>
作者:
曾经沧海
时间:
2008-11-13 23:09
<p align="center"><strong><font color="#ff0000">蝶</font>犹迷剪翠，<br/><font color="red">恋</font>阙劳肝肺。<br/><font color="red">花</font>竹映柴关。</strong></p>
& b' H- q1 T" x8 i/ w' F
<p align="center"><strong></strong> </p>
- [& ]; ~" K3 i) ]
<p align="center"><strong></strong> </p>
) L2 V% K L: h: M: _" D" h0 N k
<p align="center"><strong><font color="#ff0000">蝶</font>绕花枝恋暖香，<br/><font color="red">恋</font>别山灯忆水灯。<br/><font color="red">花</font>柳苍苍月欲来。</strong></p>
' n2 M- ?' R; ^+ A! [" @, U
<p align="center"><strong></strong> </p>
9 a8 E' ~& W$ W
<p align="center"><strong></strong> </p>
. `$ D) J& A1 a! k
<p align="center"><strong>晚树迷新<font color="red">蝶</font>，<br/>解兹区中<font color="red">恋</font>。<br/>着树渐成<font color="red">花</font>。</strong></p>
4 t6 B7 z9 H0 l' D: L9 y( ^
<p align="center"><strong></strong> </p>
+ H! F, }' m( P
<p align="center"><strong>新蕊度香翻宿<font color="red">蝶</font>，<br/>去无所逐来无<font color="red">恋</font>。<br/>美人曾插九枝<font color="red">花</font>。<br/></strong></p>
8 s( L$ f. U/ o n; ~ j' k2 p( V
<p align="center"><strong></strong> </p>
3 l1 e Q- o& x/ I
<p align="center"><strong>光凝<font color="red">蝶</font>翅明，<br/>疲马<font color="red">恋</font>空城。<br/>桂树<font color="red">花</font>应发。</strong></p>
9 R" J6 _' v9 t/ p! m& O5 }: Z
<p align="center"><strong><br/> </p></strong>
, `* L5 L$ H: X9 L' k9 F
<p align="center"><strong>留连戏<font color="red">蝶</font>时时舞，<br/>婴儿只<font color="red">恋</font>阳中母。<br/>昨夜冰<font color="red">花</font>犹作柱。</strong></p>
3 a# i- s6 V2 ^5 v1 K, ]0 t0 X& h: D4 ^
<p align="center"><strong></strong> </p>
! t1 W' M" u- G f0 Z
<p align="center"><strong></strong> </p>
* e$ z; Y, u; ^! T
<p align="center"><strong><font color="#ff0000">蝶</font>解舞宫城，<br/>休<font color="red">恋</font>主人杯。<br/>后庭<font color="red">花</font>一曲。</strong></p>
4 n6 x8 ^5 Z+ u: ]1 \3 U
<p align="center"><strong></strong> </p>
[& X/ W6 E! D- z: t
<p align="center"><strong><font color="#ff0000">蝶</font>舞闲时梦忽成，<br/>贪<font color="red">恋</font>君恩退未能。<br/>帝城<font color="red">花</font>笑长斋客。</strong></p>
' g& Q/ P V A- ^) I8 q" k
<p align="center"><strong></strong> </p>
: |% `# o& L' C
<p align="center"><strong>有梦多为<font color="red">蝶</font>，<br/>钟仪徒<font color="red">恋</font>楚。<br/>觅得<font color="red">花</font>千树。</strong></p>
1 o; k% _" D; z* ~
<p align="center"><strong></strong> </p>
" V0 m2 W6 ~+ q' e1 Q+ U
<p align="center"><strong>绕篱野菜飞黄<font color="red">蝶</font>，<br/>迹忝已成方<font color="red">恋</font>赏。<br/>若使明年<font color="red">花</font>可待。</strong></p>
+ I# Z1 Q+ ^$ b
<p><strong></strong> </p>
}6 x' V- O# _4 ], n
<p><strong></strong> </p>
; A2 r9 G$ i2 B, B0 ^1 B7 @' g
<p><strong></strong> </p>
@/ @% O4 s3 u' s0 \- z
<p><strong></strong> </p>
$ X1 ?( \, P; S0 u3 V! \
<p align="center"><u><strong>囊中<font color="red">曾</font>有药，<br/>复来<font color="red">经</font>此道。<br/>知我<font color="red">沧</font>溟心，<br/>喜结<font color="red">海</font>上契。</strong></u></p>
作者:
守护海豚の熊
时间:
2008-11-14 12:24
<p>我喜欢所有的<蝶恋花>的诗,于是自己也乱创作了一首.</p>
7 J* G. A+ N% [
<p>希望大家不要见笑.</p>
作者:
羊得草
时间:
2008-11-17 19:41
好棒哦！
作者:
纳兰卡卡
时间:
2008-11-21 01:30
<p>夜深</p>
% n0 Q- d N2 b% x$ | K
<p>无聊</p>
+ `+ M* l6 W/ J' e* b
<p>没有睡意</p>
: X s/ ^9 j# [
<p>随便晃荡 </p>
3 s$ t* G1 f- d
<p>不小心</p>
# Z/ \0 Y, s2 S* t0 a
<p>就到了这了</p>
! o8 v c5 b9 G0 b
<p> 发现一点东西啊,不是为了打击你,也不是说贬低,只是冒昧问下,:</p>
. U" s. @3 B& I1 K% Z
<p>其一:</p>
1 F$ g. W; C/ `8 o1 o
<p>这词有没有按照平仄去写呀??</p>
5 b6 E: A- u0 F
<p>其二:</p>
2 k( A& r D& z) y
<p>每首词都有固定的韵脚(这是古诗的局限),不知道学弟有没有这意向?貌似我个人感觉有点不对,(兴许我要求太高).</p>
. u( L2 q9 O, Q' _% O1 g- q
<p>其三:</p>
; M; O* `0 w, G- {1 M# v
<p>每首词或者诗,都以情见长,用文字刻画场景,让人参悟其中的情.可我只能从表明看到一些,找不到意境,也就是在文字中找到那幅画.(估计我水平不够)</p>
& |8 h# x2 [; T% j
<p>其四:</p>
( R1 c: i$ q+ h4 W8 j$ m
<p>不知道学弟有没有考虑下次用比喻象征的时候选一些相符的事物,也许效果会好些.</p>
5 m- k$ e% S5 G0 }5 l6 q$ H% M: {- m. B
<p> </p>
1 g, B; v& Q" _& c' N/ }
<p> </p>
4 Y0 r x4 s j
<p> 废话真多,不好意思哈,随便呼啦一下,有空我也去填一个,让你呼啦下,(才发现我毛病真多!_!)</p>
作者:
Near
时间:
2008-11-25 12:40
<p>寂寞寒窗空守寡，缠绵红线终绝缘！[em67]</p>
作者:
忧伤
时间:
2008-11-25 14:43
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>纳兰卡卡</i>在2008-11-21 1:30:04的发言：</b><br/>
3 C; |- q5 t+ r- [% |1 f
<p>夜深</p>
1 F9 p. }% u7 R5 `" j+ Z' z
<p>无聊</p>
4 d5 W3 S. H5 J$ s% {4 R% w
<p>没有睡意</p>
; U! K1 z% l4 g9 S" x
<p>随便晃荡 </p>
2 k+ P8 v+ k3 G" m! n5 E& d
<p>不小心</p>
7 F5 N, v0 k) f( r" q) a3 K* H
<p>就到了这了</p>
* C7 x: n+ A4 ~5 k1 z
<p> 发现一点东西啊,不是为了打击你,也不是说贬低,只是冒昧问下,:</p>
3 }* O3 Y+ _3 E; ^
<p>其一:</p>
) u# p- ? `0 n. f) t: O
<p>这词有没有按照平仄去写呀??</p>
: S0 B( h& [/ R+ J( k1 ~
<p>其二:</p>
: ]% P5 J3 g; T. c# W' W# I
<p>每首词都有固定的韵脚(这是古诗的局限),不知道学弟有没有这意向?貌似我个人感觉有点不对,(兴许我要求太高).</p>
5 N! y/ _: D5 y7 ?0 ?
<p>其三:</p>
& K' J& D/ U( _' z& b( I
<p>每首词或者诗,都以情见长,用文字刻画场景,让人参悟其中的情.可我只能从表明看到一些,找不到意境,也就是在文字中找到那幅画.(估计我水平不够)</p>
7 ~, I( D2 I: g7 r& L! D9 _' f
<p>其四:</p>
C7 X8 I- }" w3 P
<p>不知道学弟有没有考虑下次用比喻象征的时候选一些相符的事物,也许效果会好些.</p>
4 I8 K3 c/ x' n O1 c7 T
<p> </p>
% M0 J8 W2 ~9 ]0 A+ W0 R+ ?9 }
<p> </p>
/ |& C0 p1 g5 m% s! r) r
<p> 废话真多,不好意思哈,随便呼啦一下,有空我也去填一个,让你呼啦下,(才发现我毛病真多!_!)</p></div>
: a- C8 w9 a- X( B. s+ _
<p>人家刚有点写东西的情绪就被你打击成这样``刚写肯定没那么高的水平啦``不然早出名了``不然就是回到古时候了!!</p>
作者:
纳兰卡卡
时间:
2008-11-25 17:08
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>忧伤</i>在2008-11-25 14:43:46的发言：</b><br/>
& B: R7 P( P/ M& z9 ~) F+ ^
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>纳兰卡卡</i>在2008-11-21 1:30:04的发言：</b><br/>
" f4 Z$ G7 b9 `: K( f3 O8 e' u
<p>夜深</p>
7 p$ a- ~7 T7 n+ t6 ^- r0 Z# r
<p>无聊</p>
8 e1 g% M! Q8 c' s! K! Z1 |( a3 I
<p>没有睡意</p>
& v N+ j9 X x, X
<p>随便晃荡 </p>
: _. e6 I$ d$ {. a! E0 X5 V) c
<p>不小心</p>
1 q: @( a4 s" z
<p>就到了这了</p>
# d- I) V1 w) |7 I
<p> 发现一点东西啊,不是为了打击你,也不是说贬低,只是冒昧问下,:</p>
3 O& C& T0 w& j/ |
<p>其一:</p>
2 C0 I9 \/ ^9 _2 k% E
<p>这词有没有按照平仄去写呀??</p>
4 ^; {, O* u) o8 ]
<p>其二:</p>
, M- Z. {. t7 q) v3 |$ ]" z' m
<p>每首词都有固定的韵脚(这是古诗的局限),不知道学弟有没有这意向?貌似我个人感觉有点不对,(兴许我要求太高).</p>
0 Z* `1 i: m6 I1 V! n- V9 P& M
<p>其三:</p>
1 Y; \" q- B2 K* ~- a
<p>每首词或者诗,都以情见长,用文字刻画场景,让人参悟其中的情.可我只能从表明看到一些,找不到意境,也就是在文字中找到那幅画.(估计我水平不够)</p>
0 a2 k* D; m1 r1 K1 _) c
<p>其四:</p>
* e4 ^, L( g* k- _
<p>不知道学弟有没有考虑下次用比喻象征的时候选一些相符的事物,也许效果会好些.</p>
, \7 P @& g4 h1 Y2 d9 g' I
<p> </p>
9 Y. n4 _% k4 i, C
<p> </p>
% o$ p5 D H8 U- ]( n
<p> 废话真多,不好意思哈,随便呼啦一下,有空我也去填一个,让你呼啦下,(才发现我毛病真多!_!)</p></div>
0 |1 W( s, h1 g4 D
<p>人家刚有点写东西的情绪就被你打击成这样``刚写肯定没那么高的水平啦``不然早出名了``不然就是回到古时候了!!</p></div>
4 {0 ]3 c6 m4 T5 d' U8 A) z
<p>这个,不好意思拉,随便讲讲,楼主别气哈,忧伤也别气哈..</p>
作者:
纳兰卡卡
时间:
2008-11-25 17:26
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>Near</i>在2008-11-25 12:40:38的发言：</b><br/>
# M2 R* W( `# L2 v( x2 U
<p>寂寞寒窗空守寡，缠绵红线终绝缘！<img title="fxwx.com" alt="图片点击可在新窗口打开查看" src="http://www.fxwx.com/bbs/images/emot/em67.gif" align="middle" border="0"/></p></div>
! B8 a n2 r$ x7 g
<p>我就晕,这话你也说得出口...[em53]</p>
作者:
守护海豚の熊
时间:
2008-11-27 19:35
<p>卡卡,</p>
) r X) j5 t7 o) k
<p>首先,这首是词,不是诗.</p>
2 Y; e8 T* N1 K( e% V5 H5 c
<p>其次,你可以去看看苏轼写的"<font face="Verdana">灯火钱塘三五夜，明月如霜，照见人如画。帐底吹笙香吐麝，更无一点尘随马。寂寞山城人老也！击鼓吹箫，却入农桑社。火冷灯稀霜露下，昏昏雪意云垂野。"这篇<蝶恋花>也没有韵脚,不是说我没找过例子而来乱写的.</font></p>
9 p6 V6 P4 K: F+ @
<p>最后,我写的这首词不是为了描写什么景物的,而是描写心境的.</p>
1 n, i6 N: r8 I, I- X( \" x
<p>只有类似于我这样在爱情里深受过重伤的人才能体会其中的意义.</p>
4 Z) @2 p0 j, C/ R) ?8 P) R5 C' V
<p>不信哪次你试试.(Ps:不是诅咒你哦!)在深爱过一个人,又被她甩了之后,对她无比思念的时候,再来看这首词,会有种心照不宣的感触的.</p>
% S/ ~. A& E! p# \3 A' G
<p>真的.</p>
& x3 r0 R, R- G8 `7 ^) I! A2 T
<p>我给不少人看过了,尤其是受情伤的人看了,都说有这种感觉.</p>
+ c/ m2 `' D; A
<p>但是我祝福你,不会有那天.</p>
作者:
守护海豚の熊
时间:
2008-12-5 11:29
<p>没气.</p>
; x8 }4 y/ {9 S: ]; c
<p>因为我已经被很多网友恶意评价过了,麻木了[em05]</p>
作者:
纳兰卡卡
时间:
2008-12-5 14:47
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>守护海豚の熊</i>在2008-11-27 19:35:47的发言：</b><br/>
& c. x* B- U: e! a# h% m5 T
<p>卡卡,</p>
# s5 _4 D" M. I/ P9 h3 @* C8 I
<p>首先,这首是词,不是诗.</p>
# e( v. F# W/ ?7 [) l
<p>其次,你可以去看看苏轼写的"<font face="Verdana">灯火钱塘三五夜，明月如霜，照见人如画。帐底吹笙香吐麝，更无一点尘随马。寂寞山城人老也！击鼓吹箫，却入农桑社。火冷灯稀霜露下，昏昏雪意云垂野。"这篇<蝶恋花>也没有韵脚,不是说我没找过例子而来乱写的.</font></p>
6 O' ]% r( o' u. s/ W
<p>最后,我写的这首词不是为了描写什么景物的,而是描写心境的.</p>
; z9 d2 s y6 R; u
<p>只有类似于我这样在爱情里深受过重伤的人才能体会其中的意义.</p>
* E: v" }# g( `- `% X
<p>不信哪次你试试.(Ps:不是诅咒你哦!)在深爱过一个人,又被她甩了之后,对她无比思念的时候,再来看这首词,会有种心照不宣的感触的.</p>
! ~1 {* S% m& U4 _1 k8 z% n
<p>真的.</p>
- `0 A0 \8 q0 M2 i) _9 J6 f
<p>我给不少人看过了,尤其是受情伤的人看了,都说有这种感觉.</p>
/ E& J# K! s6 `
<p>但是我祝福你,不会有那天.</p></div>
# X7 [! C% d- [2 G$ t3 r7 z( A+ y
<p>我沉默...[em52]</p>
作者:
初见
时间:
2008-12-6 23:01
<p><font face="Verdana">酒未醉人，人自醉</font></p>
作者:
小果
时间:
2008-12-18 20:53
* Z8 B) n" }( M( W2 H8 q% E
<p>万里碧空，云边归雁知秋到==</p>
/ u: c' L- N# B$ o% d3 C
<p>陌上拂琴 拨醉云英拨醒月==</p>
7 D& Y0 r1 L# f5 k7 R
<p>明月清风，今夕化剪修竹韵 ===</p>
8 G7 h4 G; q$ W* I' D6 O# N
<p>春去秋回，西风吹瘦东山叶===</p>
$ n0 n. R5 d2 E
<p>折柳送别，风中飞絮伤离恨===</p>
8 P- z. B2 X8 m2 \& a" |$ g# e5 C
<p>为寄相思，蛩病雁归秋雨泣====</p>
8 N* ~6 J, T+ j, u" B/ B- Y0 d
<p>莲曲谁和？桥边琴奏江南韵====</p>
, B8 \1 d O. u1 Z' O) R% S
<p>心动谁知？万种相思悄入梦====</p>
6 B' |8 b8 y9 T
<p>云绕碧山，雾遮万壑无人迹===</p>
2 U! H- M# A$ \5 ]/ {
<p>野鹤闲云，梅为故友风为侣===</p>
$ Z- C6 }* ?, m8 h; i/ ^/ B
<p>云渡九天，偷半玫弯月===</p>
/ M! B: b% O% l+ E6 m: W5 a R. |
<p>伯牙拂琴，高山流水酬知已====</p>
- `0 d, d! I; H, t% W" K7 Q
<p>挥袖眉开，今夕纵酒邀明月===</p>
1 e3 @' V, X6 z7 x; {
<p>烛影摇红，更深诗墨香盈袖====zzzzzz哈哈,对对联吧</p>
作者:
小果
时间:
2008-12-18 21:03
~& {) J! n1 l5 z# k( w! A
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm" 0cm="0cm" 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #66ff00">《蝶恋花》</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c">初名《鹊踏枝》，又名《凤栖梧》、《黄金缕》等。六十字 双调 </span></p>
' _1 z% X% z0 Q+ F7 K9 `
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm" 0cm="0cm" 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c">(正格)词谱,上下片律相同.<span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com
ffice
ffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
: x; L/ E6 G& V! v$ ]7 J
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"> </span></p>
! k, ~/ _3 B! v% N
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">平</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">平平仄</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄平平，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄平平</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">平</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">平平仄</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">平</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">平</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄平平</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">仄</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">。</span></p>
4 X: z0 Q# A% o( X6 w
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">(蓝字为中,可平可仄,红字则为仄韵.)</span></p>
+ y5 A1 s! l3 b# [3 X
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"> </p>
. R, b, w8 P( L; {, D
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm" 0cm="0cm" 0pt"><strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">例１：《蝶恋花》宋<span lang="EN-US">·</span>柳永 </span></strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c"> <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
" ?' \. ^; O* F- ^% Y9 Q
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm" 0cm="0cm" 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c"> 伫倚危楼风细细。望极春愁，黯黯生天际。草色烟光残照里。无言谁会凭阑意。 <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
5 J' O0 w1 C. U1 V- ]1 [ `
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm" 0cm="0cm" 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c">拟把疏狂图一醉。对酒当歌，强乐还无味。衣带渐宽终不悔。为伊消得人憔悴。 <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
' S! l$ O4 V" U6 Y% J& n( {, H5 |
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm" 0cm="0cm" 0pt"><strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">例２：《蝶恋花》 宋<span lang="EN-US">·</span>苏轼 </span></strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c"> <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
# A, A9 E3 N; v+ O+ K! c" k
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm" 0cm="0cm" 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c">花褪残红青杏小。燕子飞时，绿水人家绕。枝上柳絮吹又少。天涯何处无芳草？ <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
' l: @- ^+ n! @& C% O/ W
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">墙里秋千墙外道。强外行人，强里佳人笑。笑渐不闻声渐杳。多情却被无情恼。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"> </span></p>
" r% _$ t' r8 q
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"></span> </p>
* S# Y1 j" m& o0 l$ ^1 X
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">没韵律的词好像没听说过</span></span></p>
欢迎光临 广西经贸职业技术学院论坛 (http://gxjmbbs.com/)
Powered by Discuz! X3.2
fficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>