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守护海豚の熊
时间:
2008-11-11 14:31
标题:
我写的
<p><font size="3"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#ff00ff">秋夜难眠孤自酒,才解罗裳,微风渐寒流.明月怎知相思苦?笑照佳人朱颜瘦.朱弦难掩万般愁.</font></font></p>
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<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#ff00ff" size="3">欲饮千壶求一醉,酒未醉人,满目相思泪.轻语问花花已睡,只身孤影心憔悴.</font></p>
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[此贴子已经被作者于2008-11-14 12:25:37编辑过]
作者:
忧伤
时间:
2008-11-11 19:49
真的是楼主写的？？我怎么感觉在哪看过啊？？
作者:
贝儿
时间:
2008-11-12 15:42
<p>啊哦...</p>
作者:
守护海豚の熊
时间:
2008-11-13 09:39
<p>那你去找找吧</p>
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<p>找到一样的就来告我侵权[em65]</p>
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<p>我那天写完给了南宁市沛鸿民族中学的语文老师-梁**看过的.</p>
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<p>人证物证都有[em52]</p>
作者:
曾经沧海
时间:
2008-11-13 23:09
<p align="center"><strong><font color="#ff0000">蝶</font>犹迷剪翠，<br/><font color="red">恋</font>阙劳肝肺。<br/><font color="red">花</font>竹映柴关。</strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font color="#ff0000">蝶</font>绕花枝恋暖香，<br/><font color="red">恋</font>别山灯忆水灯。<br/><font color="red">花</font>柳苍苍月欲来。</strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong>晚树迷新<font color="red">蝶</font>，<br/>解兹区中<font color="red">恋</font>。<br/>着树渐成<font color="red">花</font>。</strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong>新蕊度香翻宿<font color="red">蝶</font>，<br/>去无所逐来无<font color="red">恋</font>。<br/>美人曾插九枝<font color="red">花</font>。<br/></strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong>光凝<font color="red">蝶</font>翅明，<br/>疲马<font color="red">恋</font>空城。<br/>桂树<font color="red">花</font>应发。</strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><br/> </p></strong>
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<p align="center"><strong>留连戏<font color="red">蝶</font>时时舞，<br/>婴儿只<font color="red">恋</font>阳中母。<br/>昨夜冰<font color="red">花</font>犹作柱。</strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font color="#ff0000">蝶</font>解舞宫城，<br/>休<font color="red">恋</font>主人杯。<br/>后庭<font color="red">花</font>一曲。</strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font color="#ff0000">蝶</font>舞闲时梦忽成，<br/>贪<font color="red">恋</font>君恩退未能。<br/>帝城<font color="red">花</font>笑长斋客。</strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong>有梦多为<font color="red">蝶</font>，<br/>钟仪徒<font color="red">恋</font>楚。<br/>觅得<font color="red">花</font>千树。</strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong>绕篱野菜飞黄<font color="red">蝶</font>，<br/>迹忝已成方<font color="red">恋</font>赏。<br/>若使明年<font color="red">花</font>可待。</strong></p>
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<p><strong></strong> </p>
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<p><strong></strong> </p>
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<p align="center"><u><strong>囊中<font color="red">曾</font>有药，<br/>复来<font color="red">经</font>此道。<br/>知我<font color="red">沧</font>溟心，<br/>喜结<font color="red">海</font>上契。</strong></u></p>
作者:
守护海豚の熊
时间:
2008-11-14 12:24
<p>我喜欢所有的<蝶恋花>的诗,于是自己也乱创作了一首.</p>
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<p>希望大家不要见笑.</p>
作者:
羊得草
时间:
2008-11-17 19:41
好棒哦！
作者:
纳兰卡卡
时间:
2008-11-21 01:30
<p>夜深</p>
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<p>无聊</p>
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<p>没有睡意</p>
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<p>随便晃荡 </p>
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<p>不小心</p>
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<p>就到了这了</p>
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<p> 发现一点东西啊,不是为了打击你,也不是说贬低,只是冒昧问下,:</p>
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<p>其一:</p>
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<p>这词有没有按照平仄去写呀??</p>
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<p>其二:</p>
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<p>每首词都有固定的韵脚(这是古诗的局限),不知道学弟有没有这意向?貌似我个人感觉有点不对,(兴许我要求太高).</p>
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<p>其三:</p>
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<p>每首词或者诗,都以情见长,用文字刻画场景,让人参悟其中的情.可我只能从表明看到一些,找不到意境,也就是在文字中找到那幅画.(估计我水平不够)</p>
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<p>其四:</p>
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<p>不知道学弟有没有考虑下次用比喻象征的时候选一些相符的事物,也许效果会好些.</p>
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<p> </p>
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<p> </p>
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<p> 废话真多,不好意思哈,随便呼啦一下,有空我也去填一个,让你呼啦下,(才发现我毛病真多!_!)</p>
作者:
Near
时间:
2008-11-25 12:40
<p>寂寞寒窗空守寡，缠绵红线终绝缘！[em67]</p>
作者:
忧伤
时间:
2008-11-25 14:43
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>纳兰卡卡</i>在2008-11-21 1:30:04的发言：</b><br/>
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<p>夜深</p>
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<p>无聊</p>
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<p>没有睡意</p>
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<p>随便晃荡 </p>
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<p>不小心</p>
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<p>就到了这了</p>
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<p> 发现一点东西啊,不是为了打击你,也不是说贬低,只是冒昧问下,:</p>
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<p>其一:</p>
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<p>这词有没有按照平仄去写呀??</p>
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<p>其二:</p>
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<p>每首词都有固定的韵脚(这是古诗的局限),不知道学弟有没有这意向?貌似我个人感觉有点不对,(兴许我要求太高).</p>
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<p>其三:</p>
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<p>每首词或者诗,都以情见长,用文字刻画场景,让人参悟其中的情.可我只能从表明看到一些,找不到意境,也就是在文字中找到那幅画.(估计我水平不够)</p>
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<p>其四:</p>
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<p>不知道学弟有没有考虑下次用比喻象征的时候选一些相符的事物,也许效果会好些.</p>
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<p> </p>
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<p> </p>
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<p> 废话真多,不好意思哈,随便呼啦一下,有空我也去填一个,让你呼啦下,(才发现我毛病真多!_!)</p></div>
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<p>人家刚有点写东西的情绪就被你打击成这样``刚写肯定没那么高的水平啦``不然早出名了``不然就是回到古时候了!!</p>
作者:
纳兰卡卡
时间:
2008-11-25 17:08
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>忧伤</i>在2008-11-25 14:43:46的发言：</b><br/>
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<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>纳兰卡卡</i>在2008-11-21 1:30:04的发言：</b><br/>
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<p>夜深</p>
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<p>无聊</p>
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<p>没有睡意</p>
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<p>随便晃荡 </p>
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<p>不小心</p>
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<p>就到了这了</p>
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<p> 发现一点东西啊,不是为了打击你,也不是说贬低,只是冒昧问下,:</p>
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<p>其一:</p>
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<p>这词有没有按照平仄去写呀??</p>
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<p>其二:</p>
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<p>每首词都有固定的韵脚(这是古诗的局限),不知道学弟有没有这意向?貌似我个人感觉有点不对,(兴许我要求太高).</p>
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<p>其三:</p>
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<p>每首词或者诗,都以情见长,用文字刻画场景,让人参悟其中的情.可我只能从表明看到一些,找不到意境,也就是在文字中找到那幅画.(估计我水平不够)</p>
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<p>其四:</p>
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<p>不知道学弟有没有考虑下次用比喻象征的时候选一些相符的事物,也许效果会好些.</p>
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<p> </p>
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<p> </p>
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<p> 废话真多,不好意思哈,随便呼啦一下,有空我也去填一个,让你呼啦下,(才发现我毛病真多!_!)</p></div>
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<p>人家刚有点写东西的情绪就被你打击成这样``刚写肯定没那么高的水平啦``不然早出名了``不然就是回到古时候了!!</p></div>
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<p>这个,不好意思拉,随便讲讲,楼主别气哈,忧伤也别气哈..</p>
作者:
纳兰卡卡
时间:
2008-11-25 17:26
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>Near</i>在2008-11-25 12:40:38的发言：</b><br/>
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<p>寂寞寒窗空守寡，缠绵红线终绝缘！<img title="fxwx.com" alt="图片点击可在新窗口打开查看" src="http://www.fxwx.com/bbs/images/emot/em67.gif" align="middle" border="0"/></p></div>
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<p>我就晕,这话你也说得出口...[em53]</p>
作者:
守护海豚の熊
时间:
2008-11-27 19:35
<p>卡卡,</p>
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<p>首先,这首是词,不是诗.</p>
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<p>其次,你可以去看看苏轼写的"<font face="Verdana">灯火钱塘三五夜，明月如霜，照见人如画。帐底吹笙香吐麝，更无一点尘随马。寂寞山城人老也！击鼓吹箫，却入农桑社。火冷灯稀霜露下，昏昏雪意云垂野。"这篇<蝶恋花>也没有韵脚,不是说我没找过例子而来乱写的.</font></p>
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<p>最后,我写的这首词不是为了描写什么景物的,而是描写心境的.</p>
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<p>只有类似于我这样在爱情里深受过重伤的人才能体会其中的意义.</p>
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<p>不信哪次你试试.(Ps:不是诅咒你哦!)在深爱过一个人,又被她甩了之后,对她无比思念的时候,再来看这首词,会有种心照不宣的感触的.</p>
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<p>真的.</p>
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<p>我给不少人看过了,尤其是受情伤的人看了,都说有这种感觉.</p>
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<p>但是我祝福你,不会有那天.</p>
作者:
守护海豚の熊
时间:
2008-12-5 11:29
<p>没气.</p>
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<p>因为我已经被很多网友恶意评价过了,麻木了[em05]</p>
作者:
纳兰卡卡
时间:
2008-12-5 14:47
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>守护海豚の熊</i>在2008-11-27 19:35:47的发言：</b><br/>
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<p>卡卡,</p>
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<p>首先,这首是词,不是诗.</p>
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<p>其次,你可以去看看苏轼写的"<font face="Verdana">灯火钱塘三五夜，明月如霜，照见人如画。帐底吹笙香吐麝，更无一点尘随马。寂寞山城人老也！击鼓吹箫，却入农桑社。火冷灯稀霜露下，昏昏雪意云垂野。"这篇<蝶恋花>也没有韵脚,不是说我没找过例子而来乱写的.</font></p>
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<p>最后,我写的这首词不是为了描写什么景物的,而是描写心境的.</p>
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<p>只有类似于我这样在爱情里深受过重伤的人才能体会其中的意义.</p>
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<p>不信哪次你试试.(Ps:不是诅咒你哦!)在深爱过一个人,又被她甩了之后,对她无比思念的时候,再来看这首词,会有种心照不宣的感触的.</p>
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<p>真的.</p>
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<p>我给不少人看过了,尤其是受情伤的人看了,都说有这种感觉.</p>
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<p>但是我祝福你,不会有那天.</p></div>
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<p>我沉默...[em52]</p>
作者:
初见
时间:
2008-12-6 23:01
<p><font face="Verdana">酒未醉人，人自醉</font></p>
作者:
小果
时间:
2008-12-18 20:53
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<p>万里碧空，云边归雁知秋到==</p>
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<p>陌上拂琴 拨醉云英拨醒月==</p>
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<p>明月清风，今夕化剪修竹韵 ===</p>
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<p>春去秋回，西风吹瘦东山叶===</p>
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<p>折柳送别，风中飞絮伤离恨===</p>
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<p>为寄相思，蛩病雁归秋雨泣====</p>
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<p>莲曲谁和？桥边琴奏江南韵====</p>
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<p>心动谁知？万种相思悄入梦====</p>
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<p>云绕碧山，雾遮万壑无人迹===</p>
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<p>野鹤闲云，梅为故友风为侣===</p>
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<p>云渡九天，偷半玫弯月===</p>
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<p>伯牙拂琴，高山流水酬知已====</p>
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<p>挥袖眉开，今夕纵酒邀明月===</p>
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<p>烛影摇红，更深诗墨香盈袖====zzzzzz哈哈,对对联吧</p>
作者:
小果
时间:
2008-12-18 21:03
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<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm" 0cm="0cm" 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #66ff00">《蝶恋花》</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c">初名《鹊踏枝》，又名《凤栖梧》、《黄金缕》等。六十字 双调 </span></p>
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<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm" 0cm="0cm" 0pt"><strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">例１：《蝶恋花》宋<span lang="EN-US">·</span>柳永 </span></strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #3c3c3c"> <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
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